Friday, July 4, 2014

Just another Cinderella story

Well the first thing you should know is that I read this book and this is what I know about the vietnam war. Also, this is a high school Cinderella story so it is different from all the other stories you may hear. This is my adaptation of Where Have all the Flowers Gone a story about a girl living through her dad being killed in combat.  I made up the
Just another Cinderella story-by ali
Once upon a time 1968 to be exact there was a happy family there name was the Hills and  they had just gotten a new addition to the family Stacy hills,Rowan Hills wife had a baby girl.But one day Rowans boss said that he had been drafted into  war  that he had to go to the army base by December 26 or a police officer would come and deliver him.Rowan found out he would be going to Khe Sanh a place known for terrible war. sadly it had a lot of forest so people could hide and spy on the other group.Rowan died a few days after his arrival he was fixing barbed wire and a bomb blew up his legs the wounds got infected and he died.Stacy hills too devastated about Rowan died of a broken heart.So the now four year old Lili hills was left all alone.A neighbor called the police and she was put up for adoption.A mean woman with two daughters britana and laurmenia were so mean even a computer put red lines under them lili was given a list of chores and she was expected to faithfully do them. As years passed her chores and unreasonable punishments grew until she was in high school her sisters liked this boy named Brandon jackson who could dance like any dancer you could name.One night laurmenia had the great  idea to throw a party and they made lili spend the few dollars of allowance she had to get pizza and chips D.J. and things like that and laurmenia invited Brandon Jackson to come to well it was quite the affair and lili was allowed to go.Brandon Jackson asked her to dance and they fell in love. they had a taste for katy perry a future pop sensation that only them two can see.But from the back of the room britana saw them stealing a kiss as Brandon left but the next day at school Brandon could not find lili any were.The reason was because she was hiding out.Brandon found her crying outside the school she told him that her sisters told her to stay away from him because he does not have time for her.Brandon comes up with a idea,its to ask his wealthy parents to adopt lili so Brandon and lili can be together lili's stepmom says yes and in a month lili's new parents are the jackson's and her new boyfriend Brandon.
THE END.     

2 comments:

  1. This is a cool story and be excellent with pictures, I think it is better than the original, who wears glass slippers

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  2. Wow! Your story wonderfully merges history with a classic fairy tale (with a little bit of Katy Perry, future pop sensation, added to the mix -nice!) to make an engaging story that would appeal to both boys and girls. Writing a story that engages both these demographics is no easy feat but you've done it extremely well.

    It was a pleasure to read your story. I hope Jade and I get the opportunity to read more of your tales over the summer.

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